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In some countries, men and women are having children late in life. What are the reasons for this development? Do the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages?

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Both maps display an
island
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 before and after it was developed for tourism. The
island
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 is approximately 250 metres long, has palm trees dotted around it, is surrounded by ocean and has a beach to the west. Over the period, the
island
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 was completely transformed with the addition of a hotel and a pier;
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, the eastern part of the
island
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have
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 been left undeveloped. The most noticeable additions are the hotel rooms. 6 buildings, surrounding some trees, have been built in the west of the
island
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, and 9 buildings have been constructed in the centre of the
island
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. A reception building and a restaurant have been developed between the two accommodation areas.
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