Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the travellers?

#people #case #travellers

It is undeniable that

education

has made great strides from the past to the present.

Nevertheless

, statistics show that people's interest in

education

is growing rapidly every year. It is true that

education

means a lot in our modern world.

However

, we must not forget that the increasing demand for learning

due to

globalization emphasizes its importance.

Also

education

is important for some people but not for others, it is left to their personal opinion. The problem with our modern

education

is still those who think negatively about

education

Submitted by quliyeva799 on Fri Jun 09 2023

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

Paragraph 1 - Introduction

Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

89 words

<40

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 checks
Get all the feedback you need to keep improving your charts and letters.
Unlimited Task 2 checks
Practice and perfect your skills with essays.
Personalized suggestions
Know how to boost your score.
Detailed mistakes analysis
Get instant feedback. Spot every mistake.
Topic ideas generator
Get topic-specific ideas to enhance your writing.
Vocabulary helper
Get the right words for any topic.
Progress tracking
Track your writing improvements.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

5
band
Some people think technology development decreases crime, while others believe it actually encourages crime. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
As human lives in a contemporary era where the technology is more advanced these days, it is still unclear whether the technology increases crime or even do the opposite. This essay will examine both of perspectives along with my own opinion.
7
band
You and a friend recently went on a holiday together. there is a problem with photos you have taken during the holiday. Write a letter to your friend to ask for a particular shot in your letter explain . what the problem is with your photos . say which photo you would like him or her to send you . explain why you need this Photo.
I hope you are doing well. The reason for this letter is that I got some similar photos from our last vacation tour that we spent in Niagara. I think this happened because we got a double copy of each photo. Similarly, I missed all the photos that we took in Elgin Park which was incredible.
5
band
with the pressures on todays young people to succeed academically some poeple believe that non academic subjects at school should be removed to what extent do you agree or disagree
Nowadays, a group of people think that some subjects which are not academic should be eliminated from the syllabus and pupils can focused completely on academic subjects. I partly agree with this idea.
5
band
As transport and accommodation problems are increasing in many cities, some governments are encouraging businesses to move to rural areas. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
As society develops, it has brought about an increasing number of issues related to transport and accommodation. Therefore, companies are being encouraged by some governments to relocate to the countryside. In this essay, I will discuss that the urban citizens' lives may be less convenient
5.5
band
Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Human ‘s will is a very strong factor which plays a key role in people’s lives. Some claim that nothing can be done for an unpleasant condition namely undesirable career or low income, while many insist that an individual has a powerful ability to alter what makes his life miserable and enhance the situation. I entirely agree with the latter statement that free will can change everything. This essay provides some explanations regarding both given views.

Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the travellers?

Fully explain your ideas

Some people think technology development decreases crime, while others believe it actually encourages crime. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

with the pressures on todays young people to succeed academically some poeple believe that non academic subjects at school should be removed to what extent do you agree or disagree

As transport and accommodation problems are increasing in many cities, some governments are encouraging businesses to move to rural areas. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.