the table shows the proportions of pupil attending four secondary school types
This
provided table illustrates the percentage of students who attended four kinds of secondary schools
from 2000 to 2009, a period of 9 years. It is evident that, although
the number of children who joined the specialist, grammar, or voluntary-controlled schools
reduced over the given time scale, it rose in community academies.
At the outset, the proportions of pupils at voluntary–controlled academy were just over half in 2000, but it was fallen to one-fifth (20%) in 2009.moreover
, the ratio of pupils at grammar school was just under one quarter (25%), and it dropped to half in 2009.In addition
to that, the student's registration at specialist schools
was a small minority, the reduction also
was insignificant.
In sharp contrast to this
, however
the school attendance in the previous three schools
declined over the given time, it climbed up at the community schools
, so it became the most important institute for providing secondary education. The ratio of students who went to it was a minority in 2000, but it soared dramatically to more than a half percentage(50%) in 2009.Submitted by sm710129 on
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