The charts below show the percentage of male and female workers in country A and country B. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of male and female workers in country A and country B. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given pie charts illustrate a comparison of the proportion of workers' gender in terms of the kinds of major fields in two countries, A and B. From an
overall
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perspective, it is evident that the proportion of Services makes up a major part of all genders. With regard to the worker in nation A, the percentage of male and female workers who work in the Services are the largest, at 56% and 49%, correspondingly. The figure for Agriculture is lower, at 29% for men and 43% for women, respectively.
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, Industry accounts for the lowest percentages, at 15% for men and 8% for women, correspondingly. In nation B, the male employee working in Services comprise 65% of the total share, and
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figure is about twofold higher than that of Industry in the same gender, at 32%. In terms of the female employee, 88% of its total share is Service,
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only 11% of Industry is collected in
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country.
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, the data on Agriculture witnessed a tiny percentage in
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country, just 3% with males and 1% with females, respectively.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • gender employment rate
  • workforce
  • disparity
  • employment trend
  • notable difference
  • counterpart
  • demographic
  • labor market
  • sector
  • predominantly
  • employment rate
  • analysis
  • comparative study
  • statistical data
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