In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In recent years, lots of

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about

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situation. In

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and negative aspects of

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topic. The biggest advantage is that

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that they could practice of

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dream

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and he always has more effort

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studying

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than others, because

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him enough energy in practice. What’s more,

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children

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. A lot of

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also

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mind

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Moreover

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to face

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and hope alive.

However

, there are

also

many disadvantages to

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thinking. The most significant drawback is that some

children

have

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over-optimistic

mind

after they believe

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In addition

, they always have some high-sounding

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has

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of

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control

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world.

Although

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boy has sufficient hard, he

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can’t achieve

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impossible

dream

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Furthermore

, another great disadvantage of thinking is that it has

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bad effect

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children

’s

mind

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.

For instance

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solid thinking that he can achieve goals through exertion, and yet he fails

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he has

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dreams come true. It could harm

this

child’s

mind

.

Furthermore

, it

also

decreases the confidence of

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mind

. In conclusion, as can be seen from the points made in

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essay, there are both advantages and disadvantages to

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children

this

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thinking. Whilst there are many advantages of

this

idea

, a significant negative impact would be

children

’s

mind

is injured.

Therefore

, I feel that

overall

the advantages would weigh the disadvantages.