While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environmental problem that we have at the moment, others believe that deforestation has a more devastating impact on our world. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

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some people

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that the

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of

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temperatures is the major contributor to environmental catastrophes,

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others think that

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degradation rate plays a key role in the destructive impact on the

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. I certainly believe that

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statements have an impact

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the environmental disaster and I will examine

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views in

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essay.

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with, the increasing economic activities require a huge amount of energy,

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more fossil fuels are extracted

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as oil, gas, and coal to be utilized for any purpose.

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, the major contributor of

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emission was fossil fuel burnt that came from coal fire power plants,

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land clearing, and transportation.

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, many effects on living organisms because of the environmental catastrophe, as we have seen the weather is really unpredictable as the consequences of crop failures are

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, deficiency of rainfall and even more the

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warmer because of the

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global temperature.

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, many countries are really concerned about

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and

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the Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change to discuss how to overcome the potential threat in the future and create nationally determined contributions to reducing

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dioxide released into the atmosphere.

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, illegal logging and land clearing

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a significant

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to making the situation is worse. The

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is usually associated

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the lungs of the

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to catch

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dioxide and

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more oxygen.

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, the rate of deforestation in Borneo and Amazon's tropical

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is greater year by year, these cause

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outdoors and indoors are low quality and sometimes lead to

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respiratory disease and a decrease in environmental quality,

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the life expectancy of human become low. To illustrate, the impact of

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areas makes some areas in Indonesia

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as Samarinda, Balikpapan, and Pontianak have bad air quality which contains high particulate matter which makes many babies have lung cancer because of that substance. In conclusion, global countries are concerned about

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issues and make a real contribution to the decrease of

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emissions released into the atmosphere, I strongly believe that global warming and deforestation have a huge likelihood of disasters,

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they need to take action to prevent deforestation and global catastrophe effects.