While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environmental problem that we have at the moment, others believe that deforestation has a more devastating impact on our world. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
In today's ,
world
some people argued
that the Wrong verb form
argue
raising
of Correct your spelling
rising
global's
temperatures is the major contributor to environmental catastrophes, Change noun form
global
while
others think that forest
degradation rate plays a key role in the destructive impact on the world
. I certainly believe that both
statements have an impact to exacerbate
the environmental disaster and I will examine Change preposition
on exacerbating
both
views in this
essay.
To begin
with, the increasing economic activities require a huge amount of energy, thus
more fossil fuels are extracted such
as oil, gas, and coal to be utilized for any purpose. Furthermore
, the major contributor of carbon
emission was fossil fuel burnt that came from coal fire power plants, forest
land clearing, and transportation. As a result
, many effects on living organisms because of the environmental catastrophe, as we have seen the weather is really unpredictable as the consequences of crop failures are being occurred
, deficiency of rainfall and even more the Wrong verb form
occurring
world
became
warmer because of the Wrong verb form
has become
raising
global temperature. Correct your spelling
rising
For instance
, many countries are really concerned about this
and create
the Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change to discuss how to overcome the potential threat in the future and create nationally determined contributions to reducing Wrong verb form
have created
carbon
dioxide released into the atmosphere.
On the other hand
, illegal logging and land clearing also
a significant contributors
to making the situation is worse. The Correct the article-noun agreement
contributor
forest
is usually associated as
the lungs of the Correct word choice
with
world
to catch carbon
dioxide and produces
more oxygen. Correct subject-verb agreement
produce
However
, the rate of deforestation in Borneo and Amazon's tropical forest
is greater year by year, these cause both
outdoors and indoors are low quality and sometimes lead to emerge
respiratory disease and a decrease in environmental quality, Verb problem
apply
as a consequence
the life expectancy of human become low. To illustrate, the impact of forest
areas makes some areas in Indonesia such
as Samarinda, Balikpapan, and Pontianak have bad air quality which contains high particulate matter which makes many babies have lung cancer because of that substance.
In conclusion, global countries are concerned about both
issues and make a real contribution to the decrease of carbon
emissions released into the atmosphere, I strongly believe that global warming and deforestation have a huge likelihood of disasters, therefore
they need to take action to prevent deforestation and global catastrophe effects.Submitted by darmasamuelhutajulu on
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Task Response
Provide a clear and specific thesis statement at the beginning of the essay to establish your position and the direction of your discussion.
Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure that there is a clear and logical progression of ideas throughout the essay, and use cohesive devices to link your ideas together.