The map given below shows the plan for reconstruction of the second floor of Mason's Building. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram portrays a redevelopment plan for
an
flat situated on the second floor of Mason's building.
Change the article
a
Overall
, it is evident that the house will be modernised in such
a way that it will undergo various considerable changes.
To begin
with, the first bedroom which is located to the south-west of the flat will be utilised as a studio storage. Next,
the living area
to the right of the first chamber will be modernised into a studio. Similarly
, the dining area
which is at the center
of the accommodation will be reconstructed into a studio seating Change the spelling
centre
area
. Moreover
, a door to the landing in front of the living place will be knocked down for more space.
Furthermore
, the second cubicle to the left of the dining room will being
reutilised as a guest room. Change the verb form
be
However
, the kitchen to the north-west of the residence will be converted into a master bedroom and the third chamber to the north-east will be made into a laundry area
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