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types of cancer. Correct word choice
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activities at work to motivate their workers. Use synonyms
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training
pieces of training
people
. Use synonyms
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, in my hometown Jurmala in the summer there are some free trainings for all city dwellers on the beach.
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To conclude
, an active lifestyle is very important for our health , but individuals don't think about that . They have too busy life , so some measures have to be done to motivate Linking Words
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