The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.

The graph illustrates how households in a particular nation used their weekly wages which were measured in percentages

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1968 and 2018.

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, it can be depicted that the

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spent on food,fuel and power, clothing and footwear and personal

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decreased over the years

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, the

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spent on housing, transport and leisure increased

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the

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spent on household

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the same in both years. In 1968, families spent a large portion of their wages on food which stood at 35% but 6% was used on fuel and power which was the least

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the year.

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the same

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(8%) of the household income was used for personal

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,

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and transport which was quite similar to the

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used for leisure. In 2018, there was a

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fall in the

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spent on food to half of the

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spent in 1968 but the

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spent on leisure increased significantly from about 9% to 23% and the

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spent on housing increased to 19% which was almost half the

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in 1968. The same

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of

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was spent on fuel and power and personal

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which was quite the same as the spent on clothing and footwear (5%).