The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.

The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.
The graph illustrates how households in a particular nation used their weekly wages which were measured in percentages
during
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between
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1968 and 2018.
Overall
, it can be depicted that the
money
spent on food,fuel and power, clothing and footwear and personal
goods
decreased over the years
whereas
, the
money
spent on housing, transport and leisure increased
while
the
money
spent on household
goods
were
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was
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the same in both years. In 1968, families spent a large portion of their wages on food which stood at 35% but 6% was used on fuel and power which was the least
through out
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throughout
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the year.
However
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the same
amount
(8%) of the household income was used for personal
goods
,
households
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household
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goods
and transport which was quite similar to the
money
used for leisure. In 2018, there was a
drastical
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drastic
fall in the
money
spent on food to half of the
money
spent in 1968 but the
money
spent on leisure increased significantly from about 9% to 23% and the
amount
spent on housing increased to 19% which was almost half the
amount
in 1968. The same
amount
of
money
was spent on fuel and power and personal
goods
which was quite the same as the spent on clothing and footwear (5%).
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Vocabulary: Replace the words money, goods, amount with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Weekly income
  • Expenditure
  • Consumption patterns
  • Cost of living
  • Discretionary spending
  • Inflation
  • Economic indicators
  • Demographics
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Technology advancements
  • Government policies
  • Consumerism
  • Lifestyle changes
  • Fiscal habits
  • Budget allocation
  • Financial priorities
  • Societal trends
  • Purchasing power
  • Income distribution
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