It has been suggested that primary children should learn how to grow vegetables and keep animals. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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positive

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to learn how to grow vegetables and keep

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has been in the spotlight of public attention. I believe the

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aspects of growing them outweigh the negatives. In

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essay, the reasons for my argument will be elaborated. On the one hand, there are several disadvantages

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experience

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that

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take

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vegetables. As for the major disadvantage,

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experience

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may offer a sense of guilt to

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.

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is because

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or

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die

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quickly

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, and

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will feel farewell when they die.

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recent research, many

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have suffered from

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of

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or

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which they took

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of themselves. It is harmful memory to

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, and they

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have trauma.

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, there are myriad

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advantages

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learning how to grow vegetables and keep

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. In terms of the major advantage,

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can realize that people should live with various

animals

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and

plants

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. It is a well-known fact that

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can think that

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and

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also

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are

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to live through their

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, which they take

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of them.

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a recent study,

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who learned how to take

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of

them

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know the

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of the environment rather than others.

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,

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who experienced that were not

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because they learned how to cooperate

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through

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experience

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.

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, all things considered, I believe

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how to grow

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and take

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of

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has more advantages than disadvantages. In conclusion,

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there are many advantages and disadvantages in relation to that

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, I believe the benefits outweigh the drawbacks

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the reasons mentioned above.