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Most modern family have both parents working and as a result children spend less and less time with their parents. What is the reason for this? What problem can this cause?

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has seen great progress from the past to the present.
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, statistics show that
people
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's interest in
education
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 is increasing rapidly every year. It is true that
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education
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 means a lot to folk in our contemporary world. Today, the growing demand for
education
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 globalization emphasizes its importance.
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 issue
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education
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 is important for some nations, not important for others, it is left to their own personal opinions. The problem of our modern civilization is still those who think negatively about
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education
educatio
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education
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 it's good for children and humanity.
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, as some argue, the thoughts of
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 living in remote parts of the world prove that
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 is not important. One of the main reasons for
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, a different way of thinking and a different outlook. If the labour capacity of humanity increases, the development potential will
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 increase
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, I agree that we have several options in terms of alternatives because I believe that
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 is not only interesting for me but for everyone. A short experience shows that if we study
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education
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, we should shed light on the path of adults and children with what we learn.
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,
education
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 is invaluable to
people
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. Ideally,
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 need
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education
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 to raise their name and fame globally. In conclusion, it is a useful alternative for the development of the nation and important for the association.
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