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The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie charts illustrate how dangerous products are taken care
by
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of by
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 Republic
ok
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of
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 Korea, Sweden, and
United
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the United
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 Kingdom (
UK
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).
Overall
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, it can be clearly seen that the most
treatment
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 to treat dangerous
waste
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are
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is
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 different among
three
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the three
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 countries where
Republic
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the Republic
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 of Korea
domantly
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dominantly
use
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 chemical
treatment
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.
Meanwile
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Meanwhile
,
destroy
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destroying
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 water by fire and recycling are mostly used by
UK
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 and Sewede respectively.
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, the
UK
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also
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use
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 dumping
at
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to
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 see where
this
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 is
only
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the only
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treatment
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use
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used
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 in the
UK
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.
To begin
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 with, as regards
for
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apply
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the
UK
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, 82% of
waste
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 management
use
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 underground.
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, followed by chemical
treatment
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 and
recyling
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recycling
 at 8% for each category. There is only 2%
waste
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maneged
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managed
 by
incineartion
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incineration
. Almost 70%
Korean
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of Korean
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 is recycling their
waste
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,
then
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 only around 30%
their
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apply
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use
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 incineration and underground.
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, 55% of
poople
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people
 in Sweden buried their
waste
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 and 25% of people recycling.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words uk, treatment, waste, use with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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