The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie charts illustrate how dangerous products are taken care
by
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Republic
ok
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of
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Korea, Sweden, and
United
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the United
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Kingdom (
UK
).
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the most
treatment
to treat dangerous
waste
are
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is
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different among
three
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the three
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countries where
Republic
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the Republic
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of Korea
domantly
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dominantly
use
chemical
treatment
.
Meanwile
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Meanwhile
,
destroy
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destroying
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water by fire and recycling are mostly used by
UK
and Sewede respectively.
Moreover
, the
UK
also
use
dumping
at
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see where
this
is
only
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the only
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treatment
use
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in the
UK
.
To begin
with, as regards
for
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apply
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the
UK
, 82% of
waste
management
use
underground.
Then
, followed by chemical
treatment
and
recyling
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recycling
at 8% for each category. There is only 2%
waste
maneged
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managed
by
incineartion
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incineration
. Almost 70%
Korean
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is recycling their
waste
,
then
only around 30%
their
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apply
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use
incineration and underground.
Furthermore
, 55% of
poople
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people
in Sweden buried their
waste
and 25% of people recycling.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words uk, treatment, waste, use with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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