Some people think that to be successful, you need to get in a University education, whereas others say it is not true.Discuss both ideas and give your own opinion.

Nowadays
people
who are not achieve success without
University
education.
However
,
people
in the past have gain successful without any educational features.Beacuse they can achieve Win in their
life
in several wayes.
Following
this
statements, some
people
believe that to be successful you necessary to get in a
University
education,
whereas
others think that
this
is not incorrectly issue. In
this
eassy i shall discuss both view and i personally support the former view.
also
i will show some reasons surround my opinion. There are many reasons why some
people
think that to be success to get in a
University
knowledge
.
To begin
with, the number of
people
who have success in their
life
with higher education background.
For example
: Mr. Nitesh kumar CEO of Google
although
, come from india.he received ICT standerd of
knowledge
.on other word,D.Mohammad Eunus the founder grameenbank of Bangladesh. He won the world honorable great award from Netherlands which is noble prize for his great social Work. He get undergraduate level of economical back ground. In
this
case, he think the social economic Problems and improve our poor
people
livehood.eventually its help to
people
who are live under the poverty.
Secondly
, The successful
life
you need to get
university
knowledge
otherwise
, you do not get good job opportuncty in their future
life
.
For example
: those
people
take good job opportunity than others
people
who are not educated. Its assist to choose prifessional sectors,
such
as (engeeniaring, medicine, Teaching, sincencetis) many more.
Finally
, improve their own lifestyle.for instances,an educated person are more awar than an uneducated person.
moreover
,they are consious differents issue. Which are some of social, enocomic,health, global important matter etc. On other hand, why some
people
believe that
this
is need to successful in a
University
knowledge
. Their argue
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • university education
  • higher pay
  • sweated and sacrificed
  • higher education
  • time, effort, and financial investment
  • specialized knowledge and skills
  • job prospects
  • economic contributions
  • valuable contributions
  • fairness and equality
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