The diagram illustrates tthe process of production of olive. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The given diagram illustrates the production of olive
oil
from its tree. Overall
, the manufacturing process
consists of 7 steps. Olive stones and water
need to be extracted after the smashing and separating process
.
First,
the olive has to collect from trees and sent to a process
called rinsing, where these olives need to wash with cold water
. After that, it has to send through the belt for smashing. The smashing process
is vital for this
production because it differentiates paste and stones. Nevertheless
, only the paste goes for further
process
, and olive stones are removed.
Moreover
, the pastes keep to the bag with the number of holes and go for pressing. Then
, the further
process
is the separating where oil
and water
are separated. Again, water
has been removed, and oil
remains there. Finally
, oil
is stored in the storeroom and sent to different places via means of transportation for sale.Submitted by thuylqd76 on
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