The map below shows three proposed sites for a new supermarket (A, B and c) in the city of Ellington. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates three places considered for the construction of a new supermarket in Ellington city.
Overall
, Linking Words
while
Linking Words
site
B and C are located in the Fix the agreement mistake
sites
countryside
area, location A is in the residential area, giving it an obvious advantage Use synonyms
for
attracting residents.
Change preposition
in
Firstly
, site B is near the motorway across the Linking Words
countryside
and the industrial area, allowing it to get frequent access to shipment by road. Use synonyms
However
, the lack of customers will pose a threat to the supermarket as it is in the middle of the Linking Words
countryside
. Following the same pattern, location C is Use synonyms
also
in the Linking Words
countryside
, albeit not far away from the residential and industrial areas, making it more accessible for Use synonyms
the
consumers.
Correct article usage
apply
In contrast
, site A does not suffer from the scarcity of residents and is near Linking Words
to
the industrial zone and facilities including Change preposition
apply
traffic-free
zone, Correct article usage
a traffic-free
park
and even Correct article usage
a park
airport
. Correct article usage
an airport
In addition
, Hampford with a population of 30000 can be reached within 15km from Ellington, Linking Words
hence
Linking Words
further
Linking Words
expands
its customer range.Wrong verb form
expanding
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words countryside with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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