The map below shows three proposed sites for a new supermarket (A, B and c) in the city of Ellington. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows three proposed sites for a new supermarket (A, B and c) in the city of Ellington. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The map illustrates three places considered for the construction of a new supermarket in Ellington city.
Overall
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while
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site
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sites
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B and C are located in the
countryside
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area, location A is in the residential area, giving it an obvious advantage
for
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in
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attracting residents.
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, site B is near the motorway across the
countryside
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and the industrial area, allowing it to get frequent access to shipment by road.
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, the lack of customers will pose a threat to the supermarket as it is in the middle of the
countryside
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. Following the same pattern, location C is
also
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in the
countryside
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, albeit not far away from the residential and industrial areas, making it more accessible for
the
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apply
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consumers.
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, site A does not suffer from the scarcity of residents and is near
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the industrial zone and facilities including
traffic-free
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a traffic-free
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zone,
park
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a park
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and even
airport
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an airport
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.
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, Hampford with a population of 30000 can be reached within 15km from Ellington,
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further
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expands
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its customer range.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words countryside with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proposed sites
  • supermarket
  • locations
  • central
  • outskirts
  • residential areas
  • transport hubs
  • proximity
  • major roads
  • landmarks
  • accessibility
  • competition
  • shopping district
  • industrial area
  • green spaces
  • logistic ease
  • isolated
  • densely populated
  • traffic
  • customer reach
  • expansion possibilities
  • accessibility
  • customer base
  • logistical convenience
  • recommend
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