Your Friend has been offered a place on a cousre at the university where you studied. He/She would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write an email to your friend. In your email . describe where you lived when you were a student at the university . recommend the best way for him/her to look for accomodation . warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accomodation

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
email to you to congratulate you on your admission to study a course from my alma mater.
Firstly
, the main purpose of
this
letter is to give you a narration of the house I stayed in
while
I was still a student at the university. I lived in an Anglican hostel and it is closer to the school field. It is a grey colour two-storey building, and all rooms in
this
hostel are en-suite. Each room has got 3 single beds that have a table, a chair, and a standing wardrobe attached to it.
This
simply means that only 3 people are allowed to stay or reside in the room.
Also
,there are cleaners that help with the cleaning of the toilets and corridors.
Secondly
, I will want to suggest that the finest way to look for shelter is by getting to meet the porters attached to each hostel. Go close to any of them, have a conversation with him or her telling them your intention and specification after which you get his or her contact. By so doing, the solution to your puzzle would be solved half way if not fully.
Finally
, I will
also
like to inform you of the error most scholars make
while
selecting their lodge.Most don't consider transportation.
However
, I urge you to put
this
into consideration. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Opayemi Olubunmi
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