The maps illustrate an industrial area in Norbiton in the present day compared with plans for future development of the site.
The proposed changes that will be introduced to the industrial area of Norbiton are shown on the map.
The ring road
that is
located in the center
of the area will be extended by two additional branches. One branch will extend to the Change the spelling
centre
north-west
, and the other will follow across a river. Correct your spelling
northwest
Moreover
, an extra road ring will be built to the south of the first ring.
Dramatic changes would be done to the existing facilities. All factories would be demolished, freeing the space for construction
of housing buildings. Add an article
the construction
Furthermore
, along the roads a shop, medical center, playground, and school would be erected.
Additionally
, at
the north, Change preposition
in
a
farmland would be reduced in size to make Remove the article
apply
a
way for a large housing Correct article usage
apply
building
.
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buildings
Overall
, it is clear that
the principal changes that are planned to
the designated area are the expansion of the existing Change preposition
for
road ways
, the destruction of factory facilities, and the construction of housing buildings accompanied Correct your spelling
roadways
with
educational, recreational, and medical buildings.Change preposition
by
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