people are sending their elders to nursing homes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this

Currently

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the world population are changing and everyone must grow up but your father and mother are

elders

. And

seriously

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problems are lack of caring them because

of

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everybody must work at their company and

not

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enough

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time to

taking

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care

their them.

Hence

, a lot of people decided to

sent

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their

elders

to stay at nursing

homes

.

However

benefit

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the benefit

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is the

elders

received good

care

from nurses and

not

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were not

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alone. On the one hand, many advantage for elder living at

nurse

homes

is under caring by

nurse

and

expertise

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that

able

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to monitor healthy which included

mentality

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and physical to them. and instantly take

care

and action in case of

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.

Also

increased mental

healthy

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because the nursing

homes

contain many

of

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people that able to share

our

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storys

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stories

and involve

many

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activitys

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activities

together each other.

Moreover

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their son or daughter can focus

with

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their job and family without worried

elders

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healthy condition.

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, some

disadvantage

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such

as

elders

mental in case of stress increasing

due to

living without their family and

strange

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place like

a

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a nurse home

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nurse

homes

.

Furthermore

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care

quality issue is very important because

of

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many

elders

live and

number

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of

expertise

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and

nurse

or doctor

are

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not

ennough

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enough

to cover all

elders

. In conclusion,

i

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strongly agree for

elders

living

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at

their

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home cause of intensive

relationship

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relationships

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with parents is very important

although

take

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care

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elder

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will

tried

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but it is the best choice for me.

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memorize

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while

we live together

is

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still

stay

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in our minds forever.