people are sending their elders to nursing homes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this

Currently
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the world population are changing and everyone must grow up but your father and mother are
elders
. And
seriously
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problems are lack of caring them because
of
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everybody must work at their company and
not
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does not
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enough
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have enough
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time to
taking
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take
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care
their them.
Hence
, a lot of people decided to
sent
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their
elders
to stay at nursing
homes
.
However
benefit
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the benefit
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is the
elders
received good
care
from nurses and
not
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were not
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alone. On the one hand, many advantage for elder living at
nurse
homes
is under caring by
nurse
and
expertise
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that
able
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to monitor healthy which included
mentality
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and physical to them. and instantly take
care
and action in case of
excursion
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.
Also
increased mental
healthy
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because the nursing
homes
contain many
of
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people that able to share
our
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their
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storys
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stories
and involve
many
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in many
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activitys
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activities
together each other.
Moreover
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their son or daughter can focus
with
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their job and family without worried
elders
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elders'
elder's
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healthy condition.
On the other hand
, some
disadvantage
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such
as
elders
mental in case of stress increasing
due to
living without their family and
strange
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place like
a
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a nurse home
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nurse
homes
.
Furthermore
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care
quality issue is very important because
of
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many
elders
live and
number
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a number
the number
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of
expertise
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experts
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and
nurse
or doctor
are
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not
ennough
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enough
to cover all
elders
. In conclusion,
i
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strongly agree for
elders
living
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at
their
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home cause of intensive
relationship
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relationships
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with parents is very important
although
take
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taking
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care
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of elder
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elder
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elders
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will
tried
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but it is the best choice for me.
Additionally
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memorize
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while
we live together
is
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apply
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still
stay
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stays
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in our minds forever.
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