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Some people argue that the overconsumption of meat has created many problems in the world. What are the reasons that some people eat too much meat? What can be done to solve this problem? Include examples and explanations from your own experiences.

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Nowadays, overconsumption of
meat
 has become one of the distresses in people’s life. There are lots of reasons that they have more tendency to eat
meat
 in their meal.
Government
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 and organizations should make a long-term plan for changing the wrong overconsumption of
meat
. In the past time, many people believe that
the
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apply
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meat
 is the best
sources
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source
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 of protein. So, it has become one of the inseparable
ingredient
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ingredients
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 in traditional food.
Also
, cooking
meat
 in their meal makes people feel satiety. for a long time, humankind has become one of the greatest carnivores in the world. Eating too much
meat
 in people’s diets has a different negative side effect on the environment and their health body like increased blood cholesterol. In order to significantly decrease the consumption of
meat
, the government should educate society through social media, films and series.
For example
, a chef who has gastronomy knowledge can have a TV program and teach audiences how they can cook nutriment meals without
meat
.
In addition
, using diet applications should be more popular
by
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 advertising. For insane, two years ago, I downloaded an application that was connected to my health record and it helped me how to have a healthy diet and
also
 it suggested me some cooking recipes, too.
In
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Overall
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overall
,
meat
 is eaten too much because of traditional food.
Although
, the government with the knowledge of gastronomy can educate people to change their diet
healthier
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to healthier
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 with less
meat
.
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