The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart shows the percentage of citizens in Edmonton who use various kinds of transport.
In addition
, the table illustrates the proportions of reasons why residents in this
city need their motor vehicles.
From an overall
perspective, it is evident that automobiles are the most prevalent mean of transport. Furthermore
, residents mostly use their cars in the city to commute to work.
In terms of the pie chart, the proportion of car commuters is the highest, at 45%. The figure for Light Rail Transit is lower, at 35%. Bus and Taxi, however
, accounted for the lowest percentage, at 10%.
The table compares five reasons why people use their motor vehicles in Edmonton. The reasons given relate mainly to work, with a figure of 55 for commuting and 45% for business. However
, taking children to school is also
high on the list, at 40%. Using automobiles for shopping is recorded at 15%, and this
data is the same as that of leisure activities.Submitted by duckiedesigner on
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