The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words
The below bar chart illustrates the
proportion
of
households
in owned and rented housing in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.
Overall
,
It is clear that
the
proportion
of England and Wales citizens in rented accommodation was higher than owned accommodation before 1971,
while
the
proportion
of owned accommodation was higher than the rented
proportion
later from 1981 to 2011. It is
also
noticeable that the
proportion
between the above two groups reaches the same point in the year 1971. Nearly 80% of
households
rented flats and houses in 1918, which was the highest percentage throughout the 93 years.
In contrast
, only around 22% of
households
owned flats and houses, which was the lowest point over the same period of years. From 1918 to 1961, the percentage of rented housing kept decreasing stably, from around 76% to 59%,
while
the owned housing kept increasing steadily, from around 22% to 41%.
Moreover
, they reach the same
proportion
at 50% in 1971.
However
, the percentage of
households
in rented flats mostly a decreasing trend between 1981 to 2001, dropped to around 11% and slightly increased to around 35% in 2011.
By contrast
, the
proportion
of owned housing was mostly increasing trend, and reached 69% in 2001, which was the highest
proportion
of
households
in rented housing over the 93 years.
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