Fossil fuels are the main source of energy around the world today. In some countries, the use of alternative sources of energy is replacing fossil fuels. Is this a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, it is undeniable that non-renewable
energy
such
as gas and coal are the most used
sources
of
energy
because they play a vital role in economic development,
whereas
in a few countries, the government has started to use solar and wind to replace fossil fuels. Personally, I think
that is
a positive decision that the government can take to make the world a better place.
Although
there is a benefit to the country from using coal or gas as the main source, there are
also
negative impacts on the environment.
Firstly
, waste from the production process of non-renewable
sources
can cause soil and water environmental pollution.
For instance
, if the waste is disposed of in lakes or seas, it will reduce oxygen in the water and can cause bottom-dwelling ecosystems in the form of fish, shrimp, crabs, or other animals to die.
In addition
, The use of fossil fuels can
also
increase the adverse effects
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global warming where the earth will feel twice as hot as in previous years.
As a result
, ice melting can occur which can submerge the island and abrasion the coast.
However
, I believe that the government should replace the
energy
sources
to avoid more serious environmental damage, it is because alternative
sources
of
energy
are very environmentally friendly and do not produce waste and pollution which
besides
damaging the environment is
also
harmful to human health. They can
also
always be used without worrying that the supply will run out. In conclusion, despite using fossil
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, which can harm the environment, I believe that other types of
energy
are safer and more advantageous.
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