The graph below shows waste recycling rates in the U.S. from 1960 to 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows waste recycling rates in the U.S. from 1960 to 2011.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the
percentage
of National recycling rates compared to the total
waste
across the United States between 1960 and 2011.
Overall
, the
percentage
of recycling rises slowly,
while
the quantity of
waste
recovery dramatically increases over the
years
. It can be seen between 1960 and 1970 the
waste
recovery remained almost similar,
however
, it gradually increased during the '70s and 80s with an average of 14 million tonnes. In 1985, the line speedily increase from 16.7 million tons of
waste
to 86.9 tons recovered in the
last
30
years
.
On the other hand
, the
percentage
of recycling
waste
remained stable during the first 15
years
and increased by less than 5% between 1975 and 1985. We can observe that compared to the millions of tonnes collected in the United States, the
percentage
of recycling
waste
was less the 30% in the
last
15
years
.
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