Some experts that is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of that outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience

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specialists think that
children
should start to learn a foreign
language
at
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age
because it is good for their knowledge. The essay will discuss some of the
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and cons of learning a foreign
language
at primary school rather than secondary school and provide relevant examples. On the one hand, experts say that
children
ought to study foreign
languages
early
age
.
In other words
, if
children
begin to learn at primary school it helps them to remember deeply.
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they can speak new
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fluently.
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,
children
in some
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countries are taught different
languages
at
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kindergartens in order to remember new words easily. Indeed,
children
learn much more foreign
languages
than adolescents. On the other hand, there are some negative aspects of learning early
age
for
children
. They prefer to play with toys and different things to learn
languages
due to
the fact that they are very young. These situations are
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of some serious issues.
For instance
, when young
children
are made to learn
languages
they are bored with studying.
As a result
, they are not interested in learning
foregn
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languages
at all. In conclusion, some
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specialists believe that it is
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correct method to teach a foreign
language
when
children
are very young.
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there are some
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and
drawback
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drawbacks
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aspects of learning
foregn
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foreign
languages
at
early
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age
.
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