The bar chart below shows Scotland's exports to the rest of the UK and the rest of the world for the year 2014.

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The given bar graph depicts some information about exportation in nine different industries in Scotland by separate bars in the rest of the United Kingdom and the whole world except the

in the specific year of 2014 by

billion

£.

Overall

as can clearly be seen,

's charts are lower than the world's and It holds fewer

billion

£ as an exportation income in Scotland.

Although

the most exports to the

consist of mineral and chemical products whilst agriculture, forestry, fishing and mining have the least portion of these exportations.

On the other hand

, services

for instance

business, finance, hotels and restaurants have the first biggest share of the cake to the rest of the globe;

however

, electrical and instrument engineering is the lowest point of these types of selling products. Starting with the

, 5

billion

£ is the maximum value which is gained through the chemical and mineral product category. On the other side of the coin, Scotland obtains only 6000000 million pounds by selling agriculture, forestry, fishing and mining-related goods to the rest of the

. Holding 13.8

billion

pounds in giving services including business, finance, hotels and restaurants to the whole world is the greatest money that was earned in

this

year.

also

with the help of electrical and instrument engineering which has the least money with 2.3

billion

pounds available.

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Exports
International regions
Trade relationships
Economic impact
Market analysis
Notable differences
Trade trends
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Significance
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The bar chart below shows Scotland's exports to the rest of the UK and the rest of the world for the year 2014.

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