You want to apply for a part-time job. Write a letter to the employer. In your letter: - Introduce yourself. - Explain why you are interested in the job. - Outline your relevant experience and skills.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my willingness to join your firm as a part-time loan recovery agent.
I am Jacob, a resident of William Street Colony, Brisbane. I am the IFBB pro bodybuilding champion for 2015 and have a six-month diploma certification from the Institute of Mortgage Services and Management.
I am inclined towards
this
job because first,
it is a part-time job from 10 am to 2 pm which is suitable to proceed my profession as a part-time morning and evening gym trainer at Gold’s Gym. Second,
I fulfil all the physical requirements prescribed in your advertisement for this
profession.
Regarding job experience, I would like to mention that not only do I have nine months of experience in the same portfolio at New Era Company, but also
I achieved 90% of my monthly target and a detailed description of it is mentioned in my experience certificate attached herewith.
I hope you will consider my letter while
scrutinising the final candidates for this
post.
Yours faithfully,
Jacob BrownSubmitted by Mrjit147 on
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The letter is well-structured and organized, with clear paragraphs for introduction, reasons for interest, and relevant experience. However, consider providing more detail about how your skills specifically relate to the job responsibilities.
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Ensure all necessary details are included, such as specific skills that align with the job requirements. Adding a bit more about your customer service skills or experience in loan recovery would strengthen your application further.
coherence cohesion
The letter has a clear and logical flow, making it easy for the employer to follow your points.
coherence cohesion
Your greeting and closing are appropriate and professional.
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The tone of the letter is formal and suitable for a job application.
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