Doctors recommend that older people exercise regularly. However, many older people do not exercise enough. What could be the reason for this? What can be done to encourage them to do physical activities?

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Many
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are not exercising enough, even if doctors suggest they do so. I will explain some possible reasons and provide a few solutions for the phenomenon.   There are several reasons why
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tend not to do enough
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.
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they are not as energetic. As individuals aged, they would usually get tired more easily.
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, many
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might feel they do not have the energy to
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that much.
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, many
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have potential dangers. Many
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are very competitive, and a majority of them require vigorous movements that
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’ bodies cannot achieve. In soccer,
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, all the bumping and kicking would even hurt a young adult. Despite that, just a strong kick could stretch one’s back.
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, the limit created by their bodies left
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with mostly boring choices. When an old person is trying to choose an
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to do, some are too tiring, some are too dangerous, and many that are left are just not entertaining. As
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get bored easily, they are less willing to
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.   Based on the causes, I have come up with some solutions. One solution is to set up clubs. Being with a group often makes things more interesting, as it provides opportunities for socializing.
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, some
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may join the club because their friends recommended them, and to meet their friends, they would come and possibly
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because
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the activity of the club. Meanwhile, parks and gyms could build and provide more facilities for
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and
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that are more entertaining and suitable for older people.
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but not least, communities could hold related events and activities per week or per month. Just like joining a club,
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could not only provide
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with a reason to
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but
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chances for making friends. At the same time, those who are not exercising enough could be influenced by
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others to
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more.   In conclusion, many
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feel too tired or not energetic to do enough
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.
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, many
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could do more harm than good to their bodies, and most of the
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that are appropriate for them are not very entertaining. To solve the problem, people can join clubs, and the community could provide facilities and hold activities to encourage the
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to
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more.
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