The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.
The table and the pie charts illustrate police sources of
money
and the money
distribution to 3 different categories in one region of Britain between 2017 and 2018.
Overall
, it is clear that
National Government was the main money
source and a majority of the money
was used to pay salaries for officers and staff.
Regarding the table, a total of 304.7 million
was funded for the police in 2017, which later rose to 318.6 million
in the next year. A lion’s share of the police budget was contributed by National Government, which experienced a slight rise from 175.5 to 177.8 million
. The figure for Local Taxes was lower, starting at 91.2 million
and finally
ending with a
significant growth to 102.3 Remove the article
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million
. At the same time, the money
supplied by other sources such
as grants accounted for only around 38 million
in both years.
Turning to the pie charts, in the former year, three-fourths of the budget was distributed to staff’s salary, the largest proportion in the chart, while
the lowest was technology at 8%. In the following year, while
the proportion of salaries dropped by 6%, the other underwent a 6% climb to reach 14%. The figure for buildings and transport showed stability throughout the period, comprising 17% in both years.Submitted by dminh on
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