The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.

The illustration demonstrates the manufacturing of how

sugar

is produced from

sugar

cane

step

by

step

.

Overall

, the whole process starts with harvesting

a growing

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growing sugar canes

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sugar

canes by

two way

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two-way

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methods and ends with

sugar

is

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being

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ready for being sold to

the

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shops and supermarkets and used by customers for many purposes. It is

an

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7-stage, linear and man-made process. The first stage is when the growth of

sugar

canes

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cane

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is ready to be harvested.

However

, there are two types of harvesting. The first one is working with

an agricultural equipment

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agricultural equipment

a piece of agricultural equipment

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which is made only for

used

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use

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in

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on

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the farm and the second one is by a farmer. The

last

method will be more

tired

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tiring

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for every human.

After

this

step

is complete, it

is need

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needs

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to be crushed to produce

juice

whereas

it still

have

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has

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to purify

juice

with

limestone

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a limestone

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filter. The

step

after

this

, it is going to be safe and fresh for people to drink. The following

step

involves pouring

purifying

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the purifying

a purifying

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drink into a huge pot and

put

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putting

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firewoods

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firewood

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in the bottom of the pot to get heat for making

juice

to

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evaporate. The

step

when the

sugar

crystals are removed from

juice

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the juice

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to remain

a

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pure syrup is called

centrifuge

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a centrifuge

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. Once the separating stage is finished, drying and cooling

sugar

is ready to be contributed to consumers through public shops.