The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The given map illustrates two possible locations for the planned supermarket (S1 and S2) in the town of Garlsdon.

Overall

, it can be clearly seen that S2 is located

on

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the city centre,

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S1 is sited

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the

coutryside

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countryside

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, both

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supermarkets can be accessed by a railway, and only S1 can be accessed by main roads.

To begin

with, the total population of Garlsdon is 65,000

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this

twon

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town

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by the towns of Hindon, Bransdon, and Cransdon. S2 is planned to construct in the city centre where

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is surrounded by industrial places. To the north and South of the industrial sites, there are residential areas. People who live in the South is easier to visit S2 and the potential visitors

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S2 is higher because 15,000 and 29,000 people from Bandson and Crandsdon live near S2 rather than S1.

In contrast

, people who live in the north are closer to S1, and only 10,000 population live near

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S1,

Consequently

, the potential market is lower than S2.

However

, there are two accesses to reach S1 which

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through a railway and main roads. Meanwhile, S2 is just accessed by trains.

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who want to visit S2 is

also

should pass the industrial area before reaching S2.