More and more people are moving away from an agricultural background to relocate in order to look for work. What will be consequences of this? What solutions can you offer?

Nowadays a growing number of

people

are planning to move from

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the country

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country side

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to more developed places for beginning their life again like working.

This

essay will look at the reason for

this

and purpose some

solution

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. First of all, I would like to argue that one of the causes for

this

case is that most

of

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the

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people

believe that the capital city severs

for

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the commercial hub

for

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a nation

whereas

the fact is almost true because of the high standard of living and

a

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better quality in more developed cities. The schools and universities in

city

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the city

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can

be

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open our

broaden

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mind

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and they give much knowledge which is related to not only educational thoughts but

also

life lessons. A

well -educated

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well-educated

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person can treat the whole

country

to be more developed

undoubtably

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. To tackle

this

issue, the educational background of

countryside

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the countryside

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should not be left to consider by the government. They need to construct a public library,

a more educated teachers

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more educated teachers

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to

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every part of the

country

and an educational discussion

ceremonial

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in order to get

the

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idea

how

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much education is important in a

country

. Another cause of

this

problem is that the amount of salary in

capital

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the capital

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is much higher than that of outskirt areas.

A professional

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skill is increasing constantly

lead

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to

get

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a better opportunities

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better opportunities

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and higher income definitely. Take an example the comparison between the amount of money of a talented person who has five

years

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years'

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experiences

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experience

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from

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in

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rural

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a rural

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area and an individual with

same

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the same

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experiences in

urban

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an urban

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is far less. The issue could be addressed by the government should equally raise the amount of salary which would attract more

people

into

profession

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the profession

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.

To sum up

, more and more

people

want to relocate

due to

the undeveloped educational background and salaries.

This

is a serious problem and unless there are no

people

to work in the agricultural land, our future will need to

be suffer

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. My view is that the main responsibility for solving

this

problem lies with the government.