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More and more people are moving away from an agricultural background to relocate in order to look for work. What will be consequences of this? What solutions can you offer?

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Nowadays a growing number of
people
 are planning to move from
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the country
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country side
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countryside
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 to more developed places for beginning their life again like working.
This
 essay will look at the reason for
this
 and purpose some
solution
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solutions
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. First of all, I would like to argue that one of the causes for
this
 case is that most
of
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the
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people
 believe that the capital city severs
for
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 the commercial hub
for
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 a nation
whereas
 the fact is almost true because of the high standard of living and
a
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better quality in more developed cities. The schools and universities in
city
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the city
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 can
be
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open our
broaden
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mind
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minds
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 and they give much knowledge which is related to not only educational thoughts but
also
 life lessons. A
well -educated
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well-educated
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 person can treat the whole
country
 to be more developed
undoubtably
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. To tackle
this
 issue, the educational background of
countryside
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the countryside
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 should not be left to consider by the government. They need to construct a public library,
a more educated teachers
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more educated teachers
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to
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in
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 every part of the
country
 and an educational discussion
ceremonial
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ceremony
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 in order to get
the
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an
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 idea
how
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of how
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 much education is important in a
country
. Another cause of
this
 problem is that the amount of salary in
capital
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the capital
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 is much higher than that of outskirt areas.
A professional
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 skill is increasing constantly
lead
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leading
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 to
get
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a better opportunities
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better opportunities
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 and higher income definitely. Take an example the comparison between the amount of money of a talented person who has five
years
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years'
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experiences
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experience
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from
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in
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rural
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a rural
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 area and an individual with
same
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the same
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 experiences in
urban
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an urban
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 is far less. The issue could be addressed by the government should equally raise the amount of salary which would attract more
people
 into
profession
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the profession
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.
To sum up
, more and more
people
 want to relocate
due to
 the undeveloped educational background and salaries.
This
 is a serious problem and unless there are no
people
 to work in the agricultural land, our future will need to
be suffer
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. My view is that the main responsibility for solving
this
 problem lies with the government.
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