The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Changes of international travel
The given table data gives information about
the
international Correct article usage
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travelers
in 5 different areas in 4 different years. As is observed from the given data, the Change the spelling
travellers
number
of international Use synonyms
Use synonyms
travelers
increased over the period and Europe was their favourite destination for travelling.
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travellers
According to
the presented table, around 450 Linking Words
million
international Use synonyms
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travelers
visited different parts of the world Change the spelling
travellers
initially
in 1990 and Linking Words
this
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number
gradually increased and reached Use synonyms
to
around 700 Change preposition
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million
in 2005. Europe received the largest Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
such
international Linking Words
tourists
which was more than 50% of total Use synonyms
travelers
. In 1990, more than 280 Use synonyms
million
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tourists
out of Use synonyms
total
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a total
448.9
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of 448.9
million
travelled Use synonyms
European
continents alone and Correct article usage
the European
this
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number
reached Use synonyms
to
over 400 Change preposition
apply
million
in 2005 when Use synonyms
total
international Correct article usage
the total
Use synonyms
travelers
were about 693 Change the spelling
travellers
million
.
America and Asia and the Pacific regions were another two favoured tourist destinations among international Use synonyms
Use synonyms
travelers
and in 1990 they received about 80 and 602 Change the spelling
travellers
million
Use synonyms
tourists
respectively. After 15 years the Use synonyms
number
of international Use synonyms
travelers
in Use synonyms
Asia
region increased to 135.8 Correct article usage
the Asia
million
which was higher than that of America. Africa received around 18.2 Use synonyms
million
international Use synonyms
travelers
in 1990 and it increased to 28.7 Use synonyms
million
in 2005. Use synonyms
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the least Add a comma
,Finally
number
of international Use synonyms
tourists
visited Use synonyms
Middle
East region starting from 8.9 Correct article usage
the Middle
million
in 1990 and reaching Use synonyms
at
15.8 Change preposition
apply
million
in 2005.Use synonyms
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