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What are the benefits of requiring young people to serve the army? Does participation in community work qualifies as an alternative?

#people #army #participation #community #work #alternative
Yes, Participating in Donations and other community works is treated as a
similiar
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similar
 job to what military people
doing
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 for the citizens of the country at the border of the nation.Because , Both are doing for the individuals of their countries.There are
lot
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 of advantages
of
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 the need for adults to contribute to the army.
Firstly
, Young folk have much more physical strength compared to elder citizens.They can achieve their goals easily.
In addition
,They have the ability to concentrate on things
as well as
 they do not have
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 of responsibilities like family and children.
For instance
, in Sudden wars
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between foreign people,younger ones actively participate in a war they keep more effort
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 winning the war.
However
, Sometimes teenagers are addicted to bad habits
such
 as drinking alcohol,taking drugs and more focusing on girls .If the
goverenment
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government
 put some rules
then
 they will them follow.
This
 way, the military requires more youngsters. The Individuals,who do volunteer work
such
 as donating food to poor ones, and helping whenever when disasters or
any
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accidents happen.For,example recently three trains colloidal each other so many humans lost their lives and some are in
a critical situations
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a critical situation
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 at that time local communities help them by providing sufficient food and donating blood and giving money to their families.Those who help by forming organisations for needy human beings,
they
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can qualify as an alternative.
To sum up
, There is much need for
bachelor's
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 in the military to protect mankind from
the
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foreigners. if we can serve in some organisation to help the poor people .we prefer the volunteer work as
an
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 similar to the army.
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