The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table
illustrate
how many international Change the verb form
illustrates
tourist
in 5 districts between 1990 to 2005. As Change to a plural noun
tourists
observe
in Change the form of the verb
observed
given
data, the Correct article usage
the given
number
of people
who went to
international travel Change preposition
on
were
increased and Europe was the most popular place to Unnecessary verb
apply
visited
.
In 1990, around 450 Wrong verb form
visit
million
people
were
Unnecessary verb
apply
travel
to different districts and the Wrong verb form
travelled
number
were
increased until become 700 Unnecessary verb
apply
million
people
in 2005. Europe was the most popular destination for tourism with more than 280 million
people
were visited there in 1990 and the number
were
increased every year until Unnecessary verb
apply
in
2005 there were approximately 400 Change preposition
apply
million
tourist
.
America and Asia and the Change to a plural noun
tourists
pasific
were the second hot place to visit with 80 Correct your spelling
Pacific
million
and 60 million
respectively in 1990 and this
number
were
rose steadily. In Unnecessary verb
apply
Middle
East and Africa, almost 10 Correct article usage
the Middle
million
and 20 million
people
went there and still
increase Correct pronoun usage
this still
with
Change preposition
to
arouns
16 Correct your spelling
around
million
and 30 million
people
two decade
later.Change to a plural noun
decades
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