The map below show bookstore in 2000 and now.
Essay type: Map 🗺️
The two maps illustrate how a bookstore had changed from 2000 to now.
Overall
, there have been several extensive changes in terms of set-up and conversation in a bookstore.
One of the considerable changes in this
figure was the setup. In 2000, there were 🎨 art , hobbies and cookery which were located in the centre, however
, these art 🎨, hobbies and cookery were displaced to the north side shortening the fiction and fixing the tables to the centre for the people who come to the read.
Another striking change that occurred in the place was a new addition. In 2000, in the south ⬇️ there was non-fiction but now it is displanted to the northeast located second fiction and implanted there and a cafe was installed in its place.
Now we can see that many changes have been made and I hope we will see the modernized view of the feature.Submitted by ieltsteaching0 on
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