The map below show bookstore in 2000 and now.

Essay type: Map 🗺️ The two maps illustrate how a bookstore had changed from 2000 to now.

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, there have been several extensive changes in terms of set-up and conversation in a bookstore. One of the considerable changes in

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figure was the setup. In 2000, there were 🎨 art , hobbies and cookery which were located in the centre,

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, these art 🎨, hobbies and cookery were displaced to the north side shortening the fiction and fixing the tables to the centre for the people who come to the read. Another striking change that occurred in the place was a new addition. In 2000, in the south ⬇️ there was non-fiction but now it is displanted to the northeast located second fiction and implanted there and a cafe was installed in its place. Now we can see that many changes have been made and I hope we will see the modernized view of the feature.

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The map below show bookstore in 2000 and now.

In recent years, air travel has witnessed a significant rise across the globe, with more flights being operated for different purposes such as tourism, business, and trade

More and more people are using computers and electric devices to access information, so there is no need for printed books, magazines and newspaper. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Alternative energy sources that use natural power of the wind, waves and sun are too expensive and complicated to replace the coal, oil and gas that we use to power our cities and transport. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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