the charts below show the males and females arrested over 5 years and the reasons for the most recent arresets.

the charts below show the males and females arrested over 5 years and the reasons for the most recent arresets.
The pie charts illustrate the percentage of people arrested between men and women over 5 years,
while
the bar graph depicts the proportion of actual reasons for being arrested.
Overall
, the pie charts show the number of boys arrested was more than that of girls;
however
, in terms of reasons, the percentage of girls was higher than that of males.
To begin
with, the charts show that there were double of arrested males than that not arrested, which was 68%.
In contrast
, the number of arrested females was much higher than that of not arrested with 91%,
while
being not arrested was just 9%.
Furthermore
, regarding the reasons, public drinking was the highest with about 37% for females and over 30 %.
Following
this
, there was more than 27%
due to
drunk driving men, totally opposite with the number of women, just under 15%.
Nevertheless
, no answer was the least reason for both genders being arrested, which was only 7% for girls and under 5% for fathers.
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