The charts below show the males and females arrested over 5 years and the reasons for the most recent arrests

The charts below show the males and females arrested over 5 years and the reasons for the most recent arrests
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The pie charts illustrate related to the person arrested divided by gender in five years ending 1994,
while
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the bar graph portrays the seven reasons for the most recent arrest.
Overall
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, there were more
males
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arrested than
females
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.
However
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, public drinking was the top position for recent reasons which was done mostly by
females
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.
It is clear that
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in five years there were 32% of men were arrested,
nevertheless
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, there was only a tiny percentage of women.
In contrast
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, public drinking as the highest proportion of the reason was done by
females
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with up to 35% and
males
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with just over a third (30%). The second logic was drunk driving which was done mostly by one-quarter of
males
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and under 15% of
females
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.
Moreover
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,
males
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were the majority in breach of an order, theft, and other reason with more than 15%
whereas
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the
females
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were one in ten per cent compared to the first and second ones, but for the other factors,
females
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were more than 15%.
On the other hand
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, assault was dominant by
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at around 19% and
males
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at approximately 16%.
In addition
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, there were 7% of
females
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and 4% of
males
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who had decided to no answer related to the sense.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words males, females with synonyms.
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