The diagram below shols how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shols how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the way that electric
power
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is generated in a station, powered by
water
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.
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, it can be seen that
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is a chain process, man-made, which has a few different stages resulting in the production of electricity during the light part of the day and restoring
water
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in the dark.
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,
water
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runs from a river into a dam with a high-level reservoir. At the bottom of the
dam
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there is an intake
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open during the day and closed at night. In , the daytime the
water
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drains through
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intake in a flow
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creating electricity in the
power
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station. In
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,station there is a generator with reversible turbines that operate
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part in the daytime (Part of the
water
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flows in a low-level reservoir). From the generator,
power
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is spread through
power
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lines and
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reaches the national grid. During the nighttime the
water
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from
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low reservoir is pumped from the turbines, climbing its way back to the dam. That way the
water
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supply is restored and ready for reuse in the morning.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words power, water with synonyms.
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