Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Tourism has
finally
come back to life after the pandemic wore off and the best-sellers in the bookshops are all relevant to learning non-native tongues. For some publishers, visiting foreign countries is the only reason that the readers buy those books. Linking Words
Whereas
some foreign culture enthusiasts might argue the opposite. In the following essay, I will discuss both viewpoints and elaborate on the reasons why I side with the latter opinion as the initiatives of learning languages can be varied.
On the one hand, the motive for language can be quite simple Linking Words
such
as curiosity by nature. Cultural diversity brings different incentives to society every so often. Japanese songs are sung in graduation ceremonies and Hollywood movies are Linking Words
also
prevalent. Some local residents just adore the exotic culture and make no plans Linking Words
for visiting
these countries. Change preposition
to visit
For example
, I personally enjoy singing Indian songs because of the acoustic background music and the meaningful lyrics. Linking Words
However
, I never want to go there because of the security issue. Linking Words
In other words
, there is a significant difference in experiencing the nations and learning languages. People might need to consider political or weather problems Linking Words
while
travelling to foreign countries.
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On the other hand
, some book dealers believe that learning new languages requires determination, so if the goal of learning them is not related to solving physical living-matter issues, their passions can deteriorate gradually and give up easily. Linking Words
For instance
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although
some students might learn some Japanese vocabulary from dramas or movies, Linking Words
this
might not enable them to know more about grammar. Linking Words
Consequently
, it will be a waste of time for them to do so. Linking Words
Nevertheless
, I think the prejudice of learning persistence is short-sighted. Even though the goal can be minor, it is still the beginning of it. Based on previous familiarity with the language, the learner might be able to catch up with relevant knowledge shortly.
In conclusion, I believe the motivation for learning new foreign tongues can be diverse, Linking Words
instead
of compulsory reactions because of real-life stress. The curiosity to explore different aspects of culture is usually a primitive but probably the most commonly seen driving factor.Linking Words
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