The most important aim of science should be improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent years, the goal of
science
has attracted the general public’s attention. The best goal of
science
is to improve human
lives
. For my part, I partly agree with
this
issue.
This
essay would give some reasons to support my view. There are some country believe that the
government
invest in
science
for lots of reasons not only for
people
's
lives
.
Firstly
, the environment is very important to our life as the environment will affect
people
's
lives
.
Secondly
, the animal in the world need protection so part of
science
will be helping all animal's
lives
.
For example
, if the water source is dirty, which is impact
people
's
lives
first,
if the world has no animals, the Earth will be unbalanced.
On the other hand
, there are many
people
who believe that the aim of
science
is improving
people
's
lives
. On top of that the
people
will help the
government
become development if they have a good life, so they are thinking that all goal should of
science
improve human
lives
;
For example
, the
government
invest in school, hospital,
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and
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road,... that make
people
's
lives
would be better and from that, popular will make their country development more than before. One important of that, the
government
should invest in
people
's
lives
because some goals of
science
for research for other aims out of
people
's
lives
are failed, the cost of
science
is very expensive, it could impact lots of things,
instead
of that, give the main goal of
science
for
people
's
lives
help the
government
to save the money in the future. In conclusion, from what is discussed above, the
government
has a lot of goals in
science
, so the
government
should
have
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further
consideration for
this
issue.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • crucial role
  • enhancing
  • quality of human life
  • advancements
  • medicine
  • healthcare
  • scientific research
  • solving societal problems
  • improving living standards
  • global issues
  • climate change
  • food scarcity
  • technological advancements
  • limitations
  • negative consequences
  • ethical considerations
  • sustainability
  • environmental preservation
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