In many workplaces, online communication is getting more common than face-to-face interaction. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

In today’s modern
world
, there has been a growing trend of interacting on the Internet
instead
of meeting offline in the vast majority of work venues thanks to the increasing
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technology. Personally,
although
there are certain drawbacks, I believe
this
phenomenon would bring greater benefits. From an
overall
perspective, it is apparent that the possible disadvantage of communicating online is the lack of emotion and the misunderstanding on multitask between
employees
’ interactions.
That is
to say, workers who are messaged each other might displayed a huge of job expertise without body language could lead to misunderstanding between them as the relationship might be broken immediately.
For instance
, a daily Email
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sent to various workers could be written as exacerbating different people or putting them into a depressive state.
This
situation can avoid definitely when the conversation
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place offline with a smile and positive emotions. Another downside of
this
phenomenon is
a
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poor Internet connection in various workplaces. By way of illustration, the slow network actually might be the factor that enormous emails from the CEO or Founder might have lost when it is sent to the
employees
, leading to a decrease
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productivity in the company.
On the other hand
,
besides
the aforementioned disadvantages,
this
trend could bring huge advantages for the vast majority of
company
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in over the
world
.
In other words
, these days, many companies especially multinational companies had had various offices in the
world
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between them allowing the
employees
in every single workplace can meet and talk to each other effectively with the application of technological advancement.
For example
, the leader can offer meetings with all the branch managers over the
world
via Teams, Zooms, and Classrooms as it could provide them to reduce travel expenses and
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different
cost
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.
Furthermore
, the meetings would be recorded so it allows the
employees
who
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can receive enough information about the previous meetings. In conclusion, despite online communication causing many consequences to a company, I believe that it
also
allows to improve productivity convenience, and cost savings. Companies in the
world
should try to find more useful ways to improve productivity in every single work venue and
also
minimize misunderstandings between
employees
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