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The advantages of the spread of english as a global language will continue to outweigh its disadvantages. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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Language
 plays a vital role in human life. Every
country
 has their own lingua;
however
, English is becoming a worldwide
language
 all over the world. Some folks believe that having
one
language
 in all nations is good for society. I
pratically
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practically
 disagree, the impending essay will discuss the reasons with a logical conclusion.
To begin
 with, there are numerous reasons
of
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 having
one
language
 in all countries. First and foremost, some masses face racism because of their
language
.
For instance
, some states of India
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racism
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with
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against
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 each other because of their
language
.
Likewise
,
Language
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 barrier is another issue.
As a result
, some
people
affrad
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afraid
afford
offered
 to travel to another
country
 because of
language
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the language
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difference
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, which stops the growth of the
people
.
Additionally
,
one
lingau
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lingua
 helps easily understand and communicate with every
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people
.
Furthermore
, lingua helps to
estabish
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establish
 the business worldwide. In controversy, it cannot be denied if the English
language
 worldwide, it will bring negative outcomes.
Firstly
,
language
 is the identity of every culture.
Language
 represents the tradition, culture and background of any
country
 or province.
As a consequence
,
this
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 will demolish the other culture soon than later. Not only but
also
 upcoming generations will unaware
from
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of
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 their
language
, which is
the
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 detrimental fact
of
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in
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 any
country
. Because most
of
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people
 love their
language
 as they love their family. A survey conducted by The Indian
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they
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apply
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analzed
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analysed
 that the importance of
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the punjabi
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punjabi
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language
 in India
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decreased by 12% in 2023
then
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and then
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 back in 2011 because of the influence of English
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medical
 schools in Punjab state. In conclusion, There is no doubt that
one
language
 worldwide comes with
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a number
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 of prons.
Although
, if we want to save all the other cultures, if have to give importance to another
language
 as well.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global language
  • lingua franca
  • communication
  • employment opportunities
  • economic growth
  • cultural exchange
  • knowledge sharing
  • education
  • travel
  • linguistic diversity
  • cultural imperialism
  • linguistic imperialism
  • colonization
  • identity
  • language preservation
  • cultural heritage
  • mutual understanding
  • intercultural relationships
  • linguistic barriers
  • disadvantaged communities
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