The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree of disagree with this statement.

One key argument is improving the quality of life of people, should be the most vital goal of

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above all

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. I completely agree with

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point of view because not only does it require a large amount of funding but

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currently our natural resources are depleting at a rapid pace. Nowadays, a sizeable amount of

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is being used in

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for experiments and discoveries. ,

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these funds could be used

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to solve catastrophic social problems which could destroy human lives in a substantial way.

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, if

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, which is being used for

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, can be diverted to social work, it will aid in solving the hunger problem easily, which our world has been suffering for decades.

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I think new discoveries should be made through

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to set human living standards up to a high level which is worth spending

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on.

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, in the present-day people are living in a dying world.

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, our natural sources like water, oxygen and forests, which are essential for life, are depleting in a rapid manner.

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inventing new technologies and developing more sustainable ways to increase these primary needs of humans should be a priority in the

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field.

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, more projects like Space X should be enforced because their aim is to evolve human civilisation to outer space which may be necessary for the survival of the human race. In

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I think

science

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should prioritize making human lives better because a large amount of

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is being used in the scientific field which could be relocated

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and we are living

at the end

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stage of our planet which needs new inventions to survive as a race.