The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004
The bananas
price
in Japan, France, Germany, and the USA from 1994 to 2004 Use synonyms
showed
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shown
per
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for per
kilogram
with Use synonyms
USD
currency. At Use synonyms
the
first glance, Japan had the highest Correct article usage
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price
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periode
. Correct your spelling
periods
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, bananas in the USA was the cheapest Linking Words
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in
all period as well.
The cost of Change preposition
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Banana
in Japan reached Fix the agreement mistake
Bananas
the
peak in 1995 Change the word
its
with
roughly 3 Change preposition
at
USD
per Use synonyms
kilogram
. In the next year, the Use synonyms
price
went down to approximately 2 Use synonyms
USD
per Use synonyms
kilogram
until 2000. Banana Use synonyms
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price
fell again in the next year until 1.70 Fix the agreement mistake
prices
USD
per Use synonyms
kilogram
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,
but rose progressively in the following period. In the Remove the comma
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last
written year, the cost was Linking Words
pricesily
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precisely
USD
per Use synonyms
kilogram
.
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In addition
, the lowest banana cost was in the USA in 1994 which Linking Words
less
than 1 Add a missing verb
was less
USD
per Use synonyms
kilogram
. Use synonyms
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price
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at
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in
the rest of time.Change preposition
for
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