The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram illustrates the various steps involved in the process of recycling
plastic
cans.
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Overall
, the total process involves 9 stages.starting from the disposal of bottles into waste boxes by the individuals and Linking Words
ends
with the recreation of final products.
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Firstly
, people throw the Linking Words
plastic
objects into garbage bins and later it is collected by the organizations in a truck Use synonyms
then
the collected cans are sent to the recycling centre where the reusable and non-reusable products are selected and Linking Words
this
method is known as sorting. Linking Words
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, the next stage is compression where the Linking Words
plastic
goes through the machines and Use synonyms
then
they are compressed into blocks and the fifth stage is crushing where they are broken into particles.
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Secondly
, the next stage is the washing of these crushed particles. After washing they are transferred for the production of Linking Words
plastic
pellets and later the pellets are converted into raw materials by the process of heating. Use synonyms
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, processed raw materials are Linking Words
finally
used to make useful products like bottles , lunch boxes, pencils, sharpeners etc.Linking Words
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