In the future, it is expected that there will be a higher proportion of older people in some countries. Is this positive or negative development?

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Developments in medical technology and health care systems, among many other factors, are leading to
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having a longer life expectancy than before. As
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trend continues, in the future, we can expect the number of old
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will be much greater than that of young
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. In several ways, society may benefit from a growing proportion of senior citizens.
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, I believe the rest of the
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population would have to shoulder much more responsibilities and the global economy would face a serious labour crisis. On the positive side, an increase in the number of old
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means a greater pool of volunteers for community and government projects. These
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are usually more financially comfortable and
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more willing to contribute free labour to ameliorate their communities.
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, we often see old
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in developed countries engage in charity work to provide shelter and food for the homeless in their neighbourhoods.
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an act
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instils a great sense of responsibility and altruism into the young generation.
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is, in fact, globally recognized to be advantageous in a
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where selfishness hinders one from taking action for the sake of others.
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, ageing populations will place the whole
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under many pressures. Both governments and businesses will have to pay for increased retirement pensions and health care costs, which means taxpayers will have to bear a greater financial burden and the young workforce will have to work harder and care for the elderly at the same time.
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, a lack of a young labour workforce would cause stagnation in the growth of individual businesses and the global economy as a whole because little innovation may take place in
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circumstance. (2) As a matter of fact, many first-
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countries whose proportion of senior citizens is higher than that of young
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as Japan, are already experiencing these undesirable impacts. In conclusion, an ageing population is beneficial in certain ways.
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, the benefits society may reap from an ageing population cannot match the damage it inflicts. It is important that the
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governments should not underestimate the complexity of
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problem and take immediate action to reduce its future influences.
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