The diagram details the process of making smoked fish. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given diagram illustrates the various stages involved in the creation of smoked

fish

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.

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, it is clear and evident that it involves almost thirteen stages starting from fishing and

ends

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up with selling it.

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,

it is clear that

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the

fish

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is caught by a net and

the next step is

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transferring them

into

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to

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the port

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a boat is used to bring them and

then

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they are stored in the freezer in order to keep them fresh.

After

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this

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, the

fish

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is released into fresh water. The next stage is where the cleaning takes place which means the

fish

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is cut down followed by colouring and dipping in the salt water and

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the

fish

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goes through smoking.

Secondly

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, the smoked

fishes

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fish

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are neatly packed in boxes and

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then

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freezed

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frozen

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in

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at

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0°c the freezer

fish

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is transferred to

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the coldstore

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coldstore

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cold store

where the boxes are loaded into the truck.

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, they are ready for

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distribution and at

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, they are distributed among various shops and later to the consumers.