In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move out of the cities and into regional areas. Do you think the advantages outweight the disadvantages?

Several countries separate their industrial

area

with

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housing

area

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.

Industrial

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area

consists

plenty

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of big companies,

while

housing

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the housing

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area

is the main

city

, the place

that

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where

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people spend their time with their relatives and others. I strongly believe that

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pushing the factories to move to the industrial

area

and cleaning up the

city

from industrial activity will get

abundance

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an abundance

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of advantages rather than negative aspects.

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essay will

gives

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two notions.

First,

cleaning up a

city

from the factories will progressively

decreases

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the crowd of the

city

, which

is have

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direct

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a direct

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relation with

the

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traffic jam, air pollution, and voice pollution. It can be clearly seen that

the

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business vehicles make cities more polluted, noisy, and

crowd

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.

For instance

, there is a concrete company in

a

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city

centre. The big trucks of

this

company will come and go in the town main road bringing big concretes.

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is

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will disrupt the

city

from

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many aspects.

Second,

states ideally build a lot of

beatiful

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beautiful

and useful public

facilities

in the

city

rather than industrial

facilities

. Building factories will reduce several

area

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that

supposed

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to

used

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to build

facilities

for the people,

such

as

park

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parks

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,

stadium

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stadiums

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,

city

square

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squares

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,

market

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markets

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,

museum

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museums

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, meeting

building

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buildings

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,

religion

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building

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buildings

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, and

highway

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highways

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. Governments and their societies have to feel free to build their

facilities

without

afraid

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being afraid

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the

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presence of

a

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big industry.

To sum up

, the positive aspects of separate businesses

area

from the town totally

outweight

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outweigh

outweighs

the disadvantages.

This

is not only because business areas will disturb the

lifehood

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livelihood

likelihood

in a

city

, but

also

cut the land that should

used

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to create plenty of public

facilities

.