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The growing number of owerweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in school curriculum

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One of the most problems of society is obesity.
This
 sick did not emerge in modern times,it was in earlier times as well,but it was seen in one out of a thousand cases.The big reason for
that is
 culture,in prehistoric times , teachers in schools taught pupils how to ride a horse, fence and something that requires a lot of effort
On the other hand
 , Increasing physical education classes in schools is not the solution because , nowadays, a large number of people work in an office that sitting down to work which earner phlegm under the abdomen in the human body.
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