The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart below compared the
price
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of per kilogram
bananas
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in four different countries including Japan, France, Germany, and the USA over 10
years
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period from 1994 to 2004.
Overall
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, Japan is a country where
bananas
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sell the most expensive compared with the other three countries over the
years
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. In comparison, the
price
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of
bananas
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selling in the USA decreased slightly and began to remain after the
last
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7
years
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. In 1994 the first year of the survey,
bananas
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in Japan sell approximately 2
dollars
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per kilogram, after that the
price
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grew dramatically to around 3
dollars
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,
however
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, in 1996 the
price
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rose back to 2
dollars
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.
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, in 2001 the
price
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fall suddenly to 1.5
dollars
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, starting to raise after that 3
years
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, reaching 2.5
dollars
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in the
last
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year of the survey in 2004. France and Germany act
similarly
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and steadily in the first 6
years
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.
However
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, the value of
bananas
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in 2002 France declined and soared sharply next 2
years
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, peaking at 1.5
dollars
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in the
last
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year. In comparison, the
price
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in Germany dipped in 2002 and remain at 1 dollar to 2004.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words price, bananas, years, dollars with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "comparison" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
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