The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart below compared the
price
of per kilogram
bananas
in four different countries including Japan, France, Germany, and the USA over 10
years
period from 1994 to 2004.
Overall
, Japan is a country where
bananas
sell the most expensive compared with the other three countries over the
years
. In comparison, the
price
of
bananas
selling in the USA decreased slightly and began to remain after the
last
7
years
. In 1994 the first year of the survey,
bananas
in Japan sell approximately 2
dollars
per kilogram, after that the
price
grew dramatically to around 3
dollars
,
however
, in 1996 the
price
rose back to 2
dollars
.
Also
, in 2001 the
price
fall suddenly to 1.5
dollars
, starting to raise after that 3
years
, reaching 2.5
dollars
in the
last
year of the survey in 2004. France and Germany act
similarly
and steadily in the first 6
years
.
However
, the value of
bananas
in 2002 France declined and soared sharply next 2
years
, peaking at 1.5
dollars
in the
last
year. In comparison, the
price
in Germany dipped in 2002 and remain at 1 dollar to 2004.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words price, bananas, years, dollars with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "comparison" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
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